"A talking dog, a talking purple dog at that, is a great opening and what a strong hook you give the reader at the end of the opening chapter. I expected this to be interesting as the pitches convey such fascination for the age range of your target readership and wasn't let down by the unfolding story.This is splendid YA fantasy writing, very well suited to the age group and with a richly diverse group of characters. I've enjoyed it very much. Credit also to your daughter who is apparently an excellent judge of what makes a book work."

Jared (Mummy's Boy).

"Sam is fascinating. Your descriptions are atmospheric. For example, your first description of Sir Clamcorn. Your dialogue is delightful. I love the talking purple poodle. Your world building is superb. This is an enticing work of fantasy with lots of clever twists and turns."

"This has all the hallmarks of a future TV classic - just the job for around Christmas time. Good writing, characterisation, believable dialogue. Great setting."

Jim D Serpent's Blood

"Hi DE,

I don’t think I can remember when I last read a story about a circus. What a great idea and this begins in an accessible and interesting way. I love the idea and your writing flows smoothly and engages us with action very soon. There is all the political and internecine intrigue as well which lifts this, as well as the sheer thrill of the circus. I think you may well have spotted a gap in the market. A great idea, well executed.

Best wishes and good luck"

Andrew W(Sanctuary’s Loss)

"I agree with your daughter (who is surely the harshest critic you'll ever have) that this is terrific, and you must write more. A book about a circus would seem, on the face of it, to be terribly non-pc (all those suffering animals!) but we quickly realise that this is so much more, and the scenarios you create, and the characters who drive your story, are truly fascinating. The book is full of really clever ideas, and I can imagine young jaws dropping as each page turns to reveal new ideas, and lots of interesting twists and turns."

Best wishes, Tony

"The idea is original - hold on to it."

Peter(A Shadow In A Shady Country)

"Well written and an interesting story, i personally have read very few books dedicated to a circus. Which is all power to you as it makes the book stand out from the crowd.

Great characters, and an interesting plot."

"I love the story and your characters, your excellent dialogue and your writing captivated me completely. Your imagination is as twisted as mine...Well done Ms Hall...."

"I think the young YA set will love this--especially if they have been to the circus and fell in love with the idea of it. You have very likable characters. Well done."

Barbara The Sea Pillow